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I saw it afar

tender fruit hanging from boughs

and clumsily rushed

to grab and eat, but I wept

after I had tasted the fruit.


I thought it would be simple to write poetry in the Japanese idiom, but when I saw and learned about the great among the poems, my heart wrung its hands in despair.  Luckily for me, in the Kokinshū at least, mediocre poetry was used to set off good poetry.


A Gathering of Flowers

100 Tanka by Ingeborg bildsbriótr Ulfsdottir


Area of Origin:   Japan


Period of Origin:           The poems I have looked at for examples range from the seventh to mid-fourteenth centuries, though I have focused on the last half of the eighth century.



               My aim was to create a collection of original poems, as much in the Japanese style as possible.  I chose one hundred, as that is the traditional number for personal collections.  Some of my poetry isn’t very good, but in at least the Kokin Wakashū (Kokinshū), the first imperial anthology (compiled 905 A.D.) inferior poetry is included to set off superior poetry.


               I wrote on such traditional court poetry subjects as ephemerality, the seasons, the lonely lady (a lady wishing for her suitor), the traveler, the travel-pillow, the Weaver-Maid and Ox-Driver, the moon, orange and cherry and damson flower blossoms, the wood thrush, returning geese, a lost capital, pillowing arms, melancholy, misfortune, grief, love, best wishes, death, parting, tears, waiting, home, autumn leaves, snow, dew, and maidenflowers.


While the simpler English grammar robs me of some of the tools used by the Japanese authors [see pages 8-10 of Japanese Court Poetry by Brower and Miner (JCP) for a discussion of particles, verb inflections, and fluidity of syntax in Japanese], I used a number of the remaining options.


All poems are set in the tanka format of five syllables, seven, five, seven, and seven, though, as allowed by Japanese court convention, some lines are hypersyllabic.  


I used techniques common to Japanese court poetry like: elegant or feigned confusion (“resembles,” “one wonders if,” “one mistakes,” or straight one thing for the other);

questioning reality;

novel verbs (a verb you wouldn’t expect with that noun); reasoning technique (“this therefore that,”);



honkadori (aka “allusive variation,” “an echoing of an older poem or poems, not just to borrow material or phrasing, but to raise the atmosphere—something of the situation, the tone, and the meaning—of the original.” JCP p.14);



linking human concerns to the natural world;

kakekotoba (aka “pivot-word” “using a particular series of sounds in two overlapping syntactical and semantic patterns” JCP p.13);

makurakotoba (aka “pillow word” “typically a five-syllable formulaic expression, often of unknown meaning, which precedes a specific noun or set of nouns” Brocade by Night (BbN) p.82, “a stylized semi-imagistic epithet, normally of five syllables, used to modify certain fixed words” JCP p.12);

jo (aka “preface,” “usually precedes the basic ‘statement’ of the poem... of unspecified length and is joined to the statement by various techniques of juncture—by word play, by similarity of sound, or by an implied metaphorical relationship.” JCP p.14);

engo (“use of a word that has or creates an ‘association’ with a preceding word or situation, often bringing out additional dimension of meaning” JCP p.14).

  Play with sound patterns, sometimes including alliteration and rhyme, was also used.


As was the tradition in Japan in the eighth century (as well as many times and places In Period) I have borrowed very freely from extant poems.  I have, however, documented whenever anything so much as directly inspired my poem.


A few of my poems were written with a Christian bent.  I believe this angle gives the American reader the familiarity felt by a Japanese reader for a poem that is Shintoist or Buddhist. In other poems I have used themes from Shintoism or Buddhism.


In a few poems such as “Endymion,” I have used images from Greek mythology, as our cultural equivalent of Japanese and Chinese legends, though I did included some images Chinese mythology, such as the Weaver-Maid.


I have based my categories (and indeed the majority of my poems) on the Kokin Wakashū (aka the Kokinshū), Collection of Early and Modern Japanese Poetry, compiled about 905 and mostly written between then and the last half of the eighth century.  Since it has 1,111 poems and mine has the personal-collection number of a mere 100, it might have made more sense to use the categories of a personal collection.  Unfortunately, I couldn’t find this information in English.


The Kokinshū is broken down into 19 books, of nine Chinese-inspired categories:


Public                  Seasonal(books 1-6), Felicitations(7), Parting(8), Travel(9), [Names of Things(10)]

Private                Love(11-15), Laments(16), Miscellaneous(17-18), [Eccentric Poems (most of 19)]


[Names of Things and Eccentric are in brackets because they were for poems that, “failed to meet the aesthetic standards applied elsewhere in the anthology” (BbN p.425).]

As I did not write poems of Names of Things, I have replaced this category with another traditional Chinese poetic category: Expressing Feelings.  I put it in the second set even though this unbalances the numbers of segments per set to better follow the sequence of most to least public poems.


               As in the Kokinshū I have sub-categorized Seasonal into seasons in chronological order beginning with early spring.  The Love category is also ordered according to the Kokinshū fashion: pre-love (one sided), increasing to mutual love, decreasing to after love.


               An interesting facet of the Kokinshū is that the compilers put the tanka in sequences, so the books read almost but not quite like a single poem of many verses.  The compilers had the advantage of having a huge corpus from which to choose poems in order to make this work.  As I wanted to make my poems on varied topics I wrote them and ordered afterword, so I had varying degrees of success in making sequences.  A few poems, such as the “falling snowflakes” quartet, I did write to go together.  It was a strange experience writing closely related poems; it’s not something I’d done before.



A Gathering of Flower






               Spring                  6

               Summer              6

               Autumn              12

               Winter                 11


Felicitations       4


Parting                4


Travel                 2





Love                    24         


Laments             3


Expressing Feelings      7


Miscellaneous                 17


Eccentric Poems            4






Spring     6



The faint breath of spring

wakes me from winter drowsing

wakes the trees to bud

wakes frozen streams to gurgle;

it wakes all the world anew.


Nature imagery is common to Japanese poetry.  

The last line is also meant to allude to how God will “create all the world anew.”  In this sense, “the faint breath of spring” is also the Holy Spirit, (which is often associated with “breath” imagery.)




The look of bright wind

and feel of yellow flowers

the scent of clear skies

and sound of does leaping

delight the senses no end.


I can’t remember the word for it, but in the first line I switch the expected sense for another (as in Dante’s “every light was mute.”).  

The intimacy implied by being close enough to hear the does leap gives the whole poem a feel of closeness to nature.




This blue butterfly,

drawn by the vibrant color

of my brocade sleeve,

can find no nectar therein.

Seek elsewhere, you silly thing!


The bug is blue in wing color, and blue as in sad, because it can find no nectar.

Inspired by a poem by an anonymous author in the Kokinshū (BbN p.431):

               My sleeve is fragrant

               just because I plucked a spray.

               Does the warbler think,

               “I have found a plum in bloom,”

               that he comes here with his song?




Warm, gentle, caring,

is it the touch of my lover

or a spring zephyr

caressing me so softly

in the gathering twilight?


Questioning for reality. Enhanced by Greek “Zephyr” myth, in which the woman confuses the name for breeze for the name of a lover.




The gracious moon reclines

upon the mountain’s high rim.

Does she eat dainty foods

and sip at delicate wines,

watching for cherry blossoms?


Here I compare the moon to a picnic-er at a traditional cherry blossom viewing party.  Since cherry blossoms are often compared to clouds for the way they bloom whitely and all at once, I am suggesting that the moon watches clouds the way a sakura-party-goer watches flowers.

The moon on the mountain’s rim is a tradition.




Spring is a maiden

a-weeping cherry blossoms

and sobbing bird-song.

Is it right that her despair

brings us mortals such joy?


A pretty conceit as I ween-a. The idea for this came from a poem by Ōtomo Kuronushi, in which he wonders “if spring rain might be tears, shed by someone regretting the cherry blossoms” (BbN p.369).






Summer          6




There is no moon!

Haze behind, drizzle still ahead!

Now is the season

of the pelican rising

from cloudbank into open sky.


               “There is no moon” and two exclamation points reference the poem by Ariwara Narihira (825-80) (NP trans. p.660):

                              “There is no moon!

                              Nor is this spring the spring that was

                              In those days bygone!

                              I myself being the sole one

                              Remaining the thing it was...”

The New Princeton Encyclopedia of Poetry and Poetics (NP) says (p.660) that this poem was considered too well known to be used for allusion, but since most of my readers will be unfamiliar with Japanese poetry, I think it’s fine.  Narihira’s poem is about change and constancy, as is mine.

According to the NP (p.658), “haze represents the spring; the moon is an autumn moon unless qualified; drizzle... belongs to both autumn and winter.”  Therefore my first lines can be read:  “It isn’t autumn! / Spring behind, winter still ahead!”  Thus its placement in Summer.

               “The pelican rising” can mean rising in the sky, rising above the competition, and rising in triumph.

               I used “still” instead of “yet” so as to also invoke the “non-moving” meaning of the word.  The drizzle is unmoving ahead; the season of the pelican is an eternal “now.”  It also harmonizes back to the “remaining” of Narihira’s poem.

               “From cloudbank into open sky” references the NP translation (p.660) of a poem by Teika (1162-1241):

                              “The brief spring night,

                              Its floating bridge of dreams

                              Breaks all apart

                              And from the peak there takes its leave

                              A cloudbank into open sky.”

But the pelican rises from cloudbank into open sky; from obscurity to celebrity, from confusion to certainty, from uncertainty to triumph.

“Open sky” also, in the Budhist tradition of Japanese court poetry, represents “the ‘Void,’ or ‘Emptiness’...to which we awaken only when enlightenment ends the illusory dream of the phenomenal world.” (ItJCP p.114)  The enlightened Pelican is not a seeker after the praise of the world, though (s)he rises to it.  The tension and harmony of celebrity while letting go of earthly things brings to mind holy hermits, and many Pelicans are solitary workers.

               The moon is “a traditional religious emblem” (ItJCP p.133) , and though it wasn’t originally intended on my part, “There is no moon!” might be a nod (protest?) to how the SCA has cut out much of the religion from our version of the Middle Ages.  Or the interpretation could be an Ayn Rand-ish: the pelican rising without the moon is the triumph of the naked human spirit. My guess is that this latter would be shocking, as Introduction to Japanese Court Poetry (ItJCP), Japanese Court Poetry (JCP), and Brocade by Night (BbN) mention poetry with religious flavor but no poetry with an atheistic feel.  But in later Japanese poetry they sometimes went for somewhat shocking when they departed from the mid-classical period’s “old words, new heart” prescribed by Fujiwara Shunzei (1114-1204) (ItJCP p.109).  For instance, here is a formal poem by Emperor Hanazono (1297-1348) which includes dogs, shacks, and little elegance of imagery (ItJCP p.126):

                              “No trace remains

                              Among all the crumbling hovels

                              Of their bamboo fences,

                              And only a dog breaks the silence,

                              Barking from the hindmost shack.”




Warm summer sunshine

yellow and black bees drowsing

white blossoms nodding.

With such a sleepy setting,

‘twould be rude not to indulge.


If even the anthropomorphosized flowers are sleeping...




Summer cicadas,

busy lazily buzzing.

Ants march to and fro and to.

Squirrels scold in trees.

Am I the only creature

with nothing to do today?


The questioning, and comparing/relating oneself to nature, are very Japanese.

While busy and lazy are often seen as antonyms, here busy means thoroughly occupied, and the tension adds some interest.  The extension of “to and fro” with “and to” emphasizes the never-ending busy-ness of the ants.  The alliteration of s in the fourth line is meant to be a hissing sound.  Don’t squirrels hiss?

The tone is meant to be mock-astonished, bored, and lonely.





Sun beats eternal

cicadas buzz endlessly.

Stifling scent of flowers

on the flaccid, humid air.

Where are the cool nights of spring?


This poem turns on its head the traditional admiration of sun and the scent of flowers.  It has the Japanese questioning.

Ssscicadass buzzz endlessssly.






Stream a rivulet

that whispers of past glory;

grasses rustle brown.

Even the birds do not sing.

Please, turn your bright eye away.


With its title, my poem alludes to one by Takechi Furuhito, “Grieving Over the Ruins at Ōmi”:

               I am not one

               Who lived through its glorious past,

               Yet here at Sasanami,

               As I look upon the ruined site,

               The lost capital claims my grief.

“Your bright eye” is bright because it is new and unruined, or because it is bright with tears.  You must turn it away because the lost capital is ashamed to no longer be glorious.

There is a sub-theme of drought (diminished stream, brown grass), in which case the “bright eye” is that of the burning sun.




Why do geese fly north?

Summer sun is on their wings.

Has no one told them

that by anticipating

they may bring winter early?


This poem cautions against precipitous action.

The second line is taken from the poem “Something Told the Wild Geese” by Rachel Field.

This poem is inspired by one by Ōe no Chisato (BbN p.378):

               Why has the cuckoo

               ceased to raise his voice in song?

               Fresh blossoms remain

on the flowering orange tree

he has chosen as his home.




Autumn          12




I am the sole thing

remaining as it once was,

for all else is changed:

plum blossoms, the spring, the year.

Why have my leaves not changed color?


Allusive variation on a poem by Ariwa Narihira (825-80)(ItJCP p.87):

               This is not that moon

               And it cannot be this is the spring

               Such as the spring I knew;

               I am myself the single thing

               Remaining as it ever was.

These poems speak of nature’s cycles and how a man feels detached from them, although (from his Budhist faith) he knows this is an illusion, and he is a part of nature.  My poem adds the question, why does it not seem that he is?

In the long headnote to his poem, Narihira speaks of plum blossoms.  This vivid image of spring contrasts nicely with the autumnal image of colored leaves.  I chose an autumn icon of change to imply impatience: here it is spring again already, and he doesn’t seem to have even hit autumn yet, himself.  

According to the New Princeton Encyclopedia of Poetry and Poetics, this poem of Narihira’s was considered too famous to be used for allusion, but I like it.




What features of fall

Make us fall to contemplating

to meditating

on this life and its sorrows

and ephemerality?


Autumn is often associated with sorrow and ephemerality in Japanese court poetry.




Plagued by vague sorrows,

looking at an autumn moon

I wonder at fate.

Did Endymion awake

and weep for his long lost dreams?


Endymion is a figure from Greek mythology (either a shepherd or a prince) who was beloved by the moon goddess, Selene.  She begged Zeus to grant Endymion immortality that they might be together always, and Zeus responded by putting the youth into eternal sleep. Each night, Selene kisses her beloved with her beams.  In one version of the story Endymion chooses the eternal sleep; in another he is not consulted, it is merely his fate.  My poem references both versions of the story: if he weeps, is it for his now-unrealizable aspirations to live his life as a shepherd or king, or is it because he and Selene will now eventually lose each other?  In other words, does he weep because he slept, or because he woke?  If the former, they are “long-lost dreams,” if the latter, they are “long, lost dreams” of her.

It is an autumn moon, because autumn is a time of endings, and contemplation.

I’m fond of the internal rhyme in plague-vague.

The first two lines are inspired by a poem by Ōe no Chisato (BbN p.378):

               Autumn does not come

               to me alone among men—

               yet I am burdened

               with a thousand vague sorrows

               when I gaze upon the moon.




Endymion woke

a millennium older.

Looking around him,

wept for his changed city

and his unchanging moon.


Does he weep because his city changed, or because he missed the changing?  Does he weep because he lost perfection in the unchanging moon, or because she never can change?




As the days grow short,

early shadows seem to lengthen

shadows seem to reach,

enveloping earth and sky,

even to my mirrored face.


Inspired by a poem by Ki no Tsurayuki (BbN p.442):

               My heart fills with gloom

               as I watch the year depart,

               for shadows descend

               even on the face I see

               reflected in the mirror.




Shadows on my face

before age can put them there.

Shadows on the ground

before early fall of night.

Shadows in the sky draw close.


Close: near, shut.




A brocade by night

is only half as lovely

in the paling light

of the distant, jealous moon

as in the friendly sunlight.


The moon is jealous of autumn leaves.  

Joy is more conducive to beauty than jealousy.  

Things should be looked at in the proper environment.




My purse is empty

today at Offertory.

Perhaps God will accept

the golden leaves I gathered

from the ground on my way here?


As I have no gold to offer, perhaps God will accept these autumn leaves?  Or perhaps the golden leaves represent prayers, hopes, good thoughts...  You give what you have, give what you bring.  There is humor at first that the speaker would offer God something He just gave the speaker, until you consider that by Christian tenant, even money we’ve earned is a gift from God.  That the speaker appreciated the leaves enough to gather them makes the speaker giving them to be giving appreciation of God’s Creation to Him.

Adapted and Christianized from a poem by Sosei (Yoshimine Harutoshi)(BbN p.375):

               I have journeyed here

               without bringing strips of cloth.

               Let the gods decide

               whether to accept brocades

               of red leaves on Offering Hill.






Deep in shaded glades

maidenflowers languish.

Do they fret themselves

at being hidden away

by jealousy of autumn mists?


Maidenflowers, along with their being hidden by jealous autumn mists, is a conventional theme in Japanese court poetry (BbN p.394-5).




Autumn mists conceal

rich brocade of red and gold

created by turning leaves.

For whose eyes is it intended,

and why is it not for mine?


This is meant to be an allusive variation on a poem by Ki no Tomonori (BbN p.400):

               For what person’s eyes

               might it intend the brocade—

               the autumnal mist

               rising to conceal from us

               the slopes of the Sao hills?




For solace I gaze

at many-hued autumn leaves,

recalling their show.

If beauty is remembered,

then can it be truly gone?


Allusive variation on a poem by an anonymous author from the Kokinshū:

               O gale from the hills,

               do not blow them all away—

               those many-hued leaves

               at which I gaze for solace,

               recalling their autumn show.


Leaves fall is ending;

soon bright winter comes skirling,

her skirts swirling

brown leaves and white snow whirling

as she’s laughingly twirling.


“Fall” in the first line is a kakekotoba, or “pivot-word.”  Separated, it would read, “Leaves fall; fall is ending.”

Rhyme is not a major technique in Japanese court poetry, but I have noticed it in a few poems, and the same authors used it when they wrote poems in Chinese, so it was known to them as a technique.

The kakekotoba slows the reader, while the following rhyming (and feminine endings to the lines) speeds, or whirls, the reader along, emphasizing the difference between slow, dying autumn, and screeching, spinning, laughing winter.



Winter    11




We saw it briefly

when the new snow was falling,

but now it’s hidden

and unseen at the bottom

first snow melts in darkness.


Those who come first, and form a foundation for the achievements of others, are many times forgotten.

The idea of snow melting unseen at the bottom came from a poem by Mibu no Tadamine (BbN p.391):

               For me these are days

               when I seem likely to die

               of a secret love,

               as banked white snow from dark skies

               melts, unseen, at the bottom..




When like falling snows

his white hair drifts away from him

and his body stumbles

will I have defiant strength

to bear his aging body up?


Snow, drifts.

This one is autobiographical, as my husband is thirty-five years older than me.  I am determined that the answer is “yes,” but it is one of those worries that come on the blackest nights. This poem is inspired by one by Ōe no Chisato (BbN p.379):

               With the falling snows,

               old age, too, has descended

               upon my body,

               but my heart—ah, that remains

               inextinguishably young!




Howling, roaring, moaning,

it sulks round the countryside.

Why the complaints, wind?

We would all come play with you

if only you were less bitter.


The speaker teases the personified wind.  Bitter: we would play if you were less grumpy / we would play if you were less cold.

Inspired by a poem by Sosei (Yoshimine Harutoshi) about a singing warbler (BbN p.373-4):

               Whom would he reproach

               With his incessant crying?

               Are not the blossoms

               Scattered by his own wing breeze

               as he flits from bough to bough?




Waterfalls of tears

cannot wash away the pain.

Blinding, dizzying snow

cannot obscure emptiness.

What use, then, all this water?


The traditional nature-man connection is made in an unconventional way—nature exists for convenience. That sentiment isn’t terribly Japanese, though the self-pitying speaker is.




As early spring growth

is killed by late winter frosts,

your feelings for me

should be cut off at the start

for you mistake winter’s end.


The first two lines are a jo.

In the last line, she might be saying, “I’m still angry with you,” or she could be saying, “I’m still in mourning.”

That she’s angry, and the feelings she rebuffs are amorous, is supported by “should be cut off.”




The falling snowflakes

must be melting as they strike;

from shining brilliance

becoming wet spots on the ground.

Even so is a man’s life.


I borrowed the first two lines from an anonymous poem of the Kokinshū:

               The falling snowflakes

               must be melting as they strike:

               the sound grows louder

               from the boisterous waters

               flowing in the mountain stream.




Thus is a man’s life:

powerless and transient

as falling snowflakes

that are melting as they strike,

soaking traceless into earth.


I like the internal contrast of “powerless strikes.”




The falling snowflakes

must be melting as they strike;

watering parched ground

as their frozen form would not.

Sometimes, change brings life, not death.



The falling snowflakes

must be melting as they strike,

for the rivers rush

and the cold lakes are swelling.

Can you feel spring on its way?




Though they melt in hand,

my heart goes running after

scattering blossoms

of the pure, six-petaled snow.

How I wish I might keep them!


Though I’ve changed the blossoms into a metaphor for snow, this poem is an allusive variation on one by Ōshikōchi Mitsune (BbN p.401):

               They are not such things

               as a man’s hand can detain—

               and yet absurdly

               my heart goes running after

               every scattering blossom.




These pure snow petals

are raining down from Heaven.

Might they be a gift

from a celestial garden

containing a cherry tree?


Questioning.  Elegant confusion of cherry blossoms for snow.






Felicitations   4



The lifespan of a crane

may we bask in your glory.

May we share your light

as the stars reflect the moon

for all eternity’s span.


The crane was a symbol of longevity.




Eternity’s span

for a thousand thousand years

may you live and reign,

imparting to your subjects

the light of your fair wisdom.


Fair: just and lovely.




Until mountains break down,

becoming mossy boulders,

until boulders break down,

becoming well-worn pebbles,

may our gracious lord live on.




Until round pebbles

grow into mossy boulders

and return again,

may our loving lord live on,

cradling his subjects.


The first two lines are from an anonymous poem (BbN p.444):

               May our lord endure

               for a thousand, eight thousand

               long generations—

               may he live until pebbles

               grow into mossy boulders.






Parting      4




Do the jealous mountains

hide away the moon so soon?

We exchanged greetings

and paused to talk a moment

such a short while ago, friend.

Two friends have stayed late, talking.  Since it seems to have been only a short time, the speaker suggests the apparent passage of time is due to the jealousy of the mountains for the moon.

A similar poem by Ōshikōchi Mitsune (BbN p.406):

               Day has dawned, it seems,

before we have had our fill

of intimate talk.

What can have become of it—

the autumn night they call long?




We must part, old friend

and the mountains grow between us.

What right has distance,

most patient of enemies,

to separate two such friends?



Growing is a novel verb for mountains.  

The mountains are both physical, and a metaphor for difficulty of communication, or emotional distance.

Distance is patient because lack of communication often slowly causes emotional distance, to separate friends in feeling as well as space.




No, they are not tears,

these droplets wetting my sleeves

as you are leaving.

Surely they are merely raindrops

falling from the empty sky.


Tears being raindrops is a cliché which I’ve livened up a bit by making it clear that the speaker is being facetious: everyone knows raindrops fall from clouds, not empty sky.  And yet the sadness is real, and the emptiness of the sky reflects the emptiness of the speaker’s heart.

In Kokinshū poetry, much is made of tears wetting or soaking one’s sleeves.




From my warm embrace

you slip away like sunshine

hidden behind clouds.

Must you make your way alone

to the far horizon’s shore?

Travel        2




Journeying outward,

the capital behind me,

like the autumn geese

I long for my proper place

and wish I could return there.


In Japanese court poetry, journey is always away from the capital, never returning.  Geese returning home is a common theme.



My red, burning eyes

can hardly see through the snow

as it falls in waves.

At times like these I wonder,

why did I ever leave home?


The Japanese court poetry conception of the traveler is always melancholy.  I wrote this for convention’s sake, that the popular “travel” category might not be quite so underrepresented.






Love    24



Do not spring away

like a startled doe, my love,

for you is flowering

in the gentle rains of hope.

Beautiful one, do not leave.


“My love” is a pivot-word; written out: “Do not spring away like a startled doe, my love.  My love for you is flowering...”

Flowers, gentle rains, and leaves are engo for spring, which now appears to reference  the season as well as the action.



Not a raging heat

like a funeral pyre.

My passion, instead,

is as warm and inviting

as the hearth-fire in winter.


Passion need not be out of control to be wonderful.




Bright sun shines loudly

while the dim moon shines softly.

Spring flowers, autumn birds—

all these things meld seamlessly

while I wait in hope for you.


The speaker waits, confident that while her lover has not yet come, he will.  (And yet, what if he doesn’t?)

The sun shines loudly to invite you to consider it in a new way.  

That sun (day) and moon (night) each receive their own line, but spring and autumn share the one after, gives a feeling of time speeding up, speeding along.  The sun and moon sharing a time (while) reinforces “meld seamlessly.”  But as time melds and speeds faster, it reaches the eternal; will she always be waiting?




Returning geese cry

with a loneliness for home.

Lady of white sleeves,

beloved I long for you,

as the black night for the moon.


“Lady of white sleeves” is a pillow word of my creation for “beloved.”

The first two lines are a jo, connected to the main by the longing all feel.  

A woman and the moon are often connected in Japanese court poetry.  The whiteness of her sleeves recalls the whiteness of the moon.




From my great yearning

I may perish and vanish


like the dew from soft petals

when touched by harsh morning sun.


“evaporating” to “sun” a jo.

The softness of dewy petals (and the speaker’s love) contrasts with the harshness of sun and whatever keeps the speaker and his heart’s desire apart.

This poem was inspired by one by Ki no Tomonori (BbN p.397):

               My yearning is such

               that I may perish of it,

               melting like hoarfrost

               on chrysanthemum hedges

               in the garden at my house.




Can it be your voice

joyfully calling my name,

or is it only

a small cruelty of wind,

gleeful at deceiving me?


Fact from illusion. Personification of wind.



It is not as sad,

the pale moon’s indifferent face

wreathed in autumn mist,

as the hours before dawn

since that leave-taking from you.


I am uncertain whether this attempt at allusive variation might have come out too similar to the original.

Mibu no Tadamine (BbN p.394-5):

               The hours before dawn

               seem saddest of all to me

               since that leave-taking

               when I saw in the heavens

               the pale moon’s indifferent face.




It reminds me not,

the scent of orange blossoms

of your bright white sleeves;

soap and spices are ever

the heralding scent of you.


Owain smells like soap and Old Spice.  This poem is in response to one by the Priest Shōtetsu (1381-1459), about a man remembering the scented sleeves of a lover from before he became a priest:  (ItJCP p.140)

Overgrown with moss,

The eaves brighten with the blossoms

Of the orange trees;

Through the old boards to my mossy robe

Comes the scent of sleeves of long ago.

My poem is simpler in content, but is consistent with the style of many of the poems of the Kokinshū.




As the Weaver-Maid

runs to her Ox-Driver,

skirts all river-soaked,

so when I run to see you,

I race with all of my heart.


The Weaver-Maid and the Ox-Driver or (Herd Boy) are constellations in Chinese astrology that face across the Milky Way, known as the River of Heaven.  Legend tells that once a year the Maid is able to ford the river and visit her beloved.  This was a popular topic in Chinese, and occasional in Japanese, court poetry.




Though in graceful song

you can’t perform before court,

though in moving words

you can’t compose for pleasure,

your heart is as great as the sea.


For my beloved husband, who has no gift of poetry and can’t carry a tune in a bucket, but has a loving, generous, sensitive heart.





Tough, reliable

stem and root of water lilies.

Your support of me

keeps me firmly, safely anchored

and not floating out to sea.


The first two lines are a jo.




Strong and yet unseen

the tough roots and graceful stem.

Work and dedication

keep it healthy and anchored:

waterlily of our love.






I dream of my home

my own dear little cottage

dwelling among trees,

where clear streams burble and sing

in pale imitation of you.


Dwelling is a novel verb for cottage.  Dwelling could also be taken as the last half of cottage-dwelling.

“Dear cottage” and “clear streams” are less important than the speaker’s spouse, who either has a lovely singing voice or sounds lovely because she is his own dear one.




Long ago the year

when our hearts first met in joy,

and we sat and laughed

and talked of little nothings.

I still treasure every word.


The first line is an allusion to Master Dolan’s “Reign for all time,” which has a similar theme.




This neglected bed

sits rumpled in the corner.

Without your presence,

I cannot bear to use it.

Will you ease its loneliness?


The Lonely Lady asks her lover to ease the loneliness of the poor, neglected, anthropomorphosized bed, when it is she who is lonely.

Inspired by a poem by Ise (BbN p.388):

               If I now wipe clean

               this neglected bed, awash

               in a sea of tears,

               may my sleeve, like a bubble,

               float on the water’s surface?




There is joy in your eyes

when you reach out to touch me.

I wish I could match it.

When we pillow arm in arm,

my heart is like a sieve.


In Japanese poetry, lovers are said to make pillows of each others’ arms.




When the moon lights your way

but you follow it not to me,

my passion freezes

and burning cold subsumes

fragile heat in my brittled heart.


This poem, written in the traditional Japanese persona of the Lonely Lady, alludes to one by Ono no Komachi (fl. ca. 890): (ItJCP p.82)

               On such a night as this

               When no moon lights your way to me,

               I wake, my passion blazing,

               My breast a fire raging, exploding flame

               While within me my heart chars.





For but a short time

I knew you had loved others,

like the prairie fire

that burns brightly and is gone.

Why did I think myself different?


She knew his previous romantic relationships had been short, but had thought it would be different with herself.






Last night I had a dream

that you and I were friends again,

my misplaced passion gone.

But awake, I do not know

if I could stand to be friends.


Inspired by a poem by Fujiwara Okikaze (BbN p.376):

               Goaded by misery,

               I resolved to forget you

               at whatever cost,

               but now I find that a dream

               has revived all my old hopes.




Oh, only a dream,

your gentle touch in my spring!

For summer faded,

and in autumn you are gone.

Must I still endure winter?


“Only a dream!” alludes to a poem by the Priest Saigyō (1118-1190):

               Only a dream!

               The bygone glories of the spring

               At Naniwa in Tsu—

               Everywhere the rough wind rustles over

               The frost-withered leaves of reeds.

Which itself alludes to a poem by the Priest Nōin (998-1050):

               If I could only show it

               To someone with sufficient feeling—

               Here in Tsu Province

               The vicinity of Naniwa

               Is filled with sights of spring.

My poem has two levels.  The woman whose beloved came in spring and summer and did not return in autumn now looks at spending the winter alone.  And a possible future version of myself in my sixties, looking back on how I had Owain in the spring of my life, he faded in its summer, and died in the autumn of my life.  The question isn’t just rhetorical—she’s wondering if she may kill herself.




Suffering wood-thrush,

can your anguish exceed mine?

Have you lost more than

the light more lovely than God?

Poor bird, who had him not to lose.


This poem refers to the Chinese legend of the suffering wood-thrush, “resembling the Philomela legend of the nightingale” (ItJCP, p.93).  “The light more lovely than God” refers to a lover and the joy he brings.  “Him” refers to the lover, (poor bird, who never had such a lover as mine!) but also to God.  In declaring her lost beloved more lovely than God, the speaker knows she turns away from God, and thus loses Him. The bird could never turn away from God—it never had the beautiful kind of relationship with God that could be lost, and so she pities it.

I am fond of the way the final line goes sideways from expectation: the first four lines are self-pitying, the fifth line pities another.




Suffering wood-thrush,

can your anguish be greater?

Could you sorrow more

if you knew what I have lost?

Greater soul, to mourn for less.


Another poem about the lady and the wood-thrush.  The first four lines at first bring you to feel that no, the bird is incapable of feeling emotion as great as human pain, but the fifth line brings it into perspective: the wood-thrush is the greater for suffering with all his heart over something less than that for which the human suffers. Admiration of great sensibility is a hallmark of Japanese courtly culture.




Today you are gone.

I know whereof the wood-thrush sings:

today you are gone.

Echoing fills the rainy sky:

today you are gone, we cry.


A third wood-thrush poem, this one alludes to a poem by Ki no Tsurayuki (868-945):

               Echoing fills the sky

               From which the summer rain is falling—

               And you, you wood-thrush,

               What anguish is it that brings you

               To sing uninterrupted through the night?

The repeated lines call to mind the pre-literate Japanese songs, though my use is more sophisticated.  My poem also uses rhyme, but while rhyme was not the rule as it is in Western poetry, sound patterns were used in it.

In this third poem in the “Wood-thrush Trilogy,” rather than competing with, pitying or admiring the bird, the lady finally identifies with it.

The repeated phrase, “today you are gone,” drums like the rain, and it also shows the woman’s despair: she is unable to get past that one idea.

“Cry” here means both “shout” and “weep.”  Weep is reinforced by the rain.





Lament      3






Red-blotched sleeves of white

we look a flock of pelicans

messy with plumage

as we follow behind it—

the reason we wear these colors.


White is the traditional Chinese color of mourning, also used in Japan at this time.  Deep grief is said to yield tears of blood.  Tears are said to wet one’s sleeves.  The SCA’s Pelicans wear red drops on white.  If blood-tears dripped on a Pelican’s red-and-white robe, you could say he had messy “plumage.”  

The coffin is both the reason they wear white for mourning, and the reason they wear red-and-white for service—it is the coffin either of their Pelican “parent,” or of someone who inspired them with his or her service.



May my grieving tears

flood the underworld rivers

making them conjoined.

That way, when he crosses Styx,

he’ll Lethe behind his pain.


Styx is the river separating Earth from the Underworld in Greek mythology.  Lethe is the Underworld river of forgetfulness.  The speaker speculates that if her dead beloved crossed a river that was combined Styx and Lethe into the Underworld, he would forget her, and the pain of loss.  There’s a weak pun between “Lethe behind” and “leave behind.” It works better if, like me when I wrote it, you think “Lethe” is pronounced “leeth” instead of “lee-thee.”






Why of all seasons

did he take his leave of us

in these days of spring

when we should be budding hope

instead of raining sorrow?


A party-pooper in life...

Engo: spring: leave, bud, rain.

From a poem by Ki no Tomonori (BbN p.467):

               Why of all seasons

               did he take his leave of us

               in these autumn days

               when loneliness chills our hearts

               even at the sight of the living?




Expressing Feelings   7




Brightly burns the flame

of my hope for your safety.

Will it be enough,

bright candle in the darkness,

to draw him safe home again?


In line three, the speaker switches from addressing “him” to addressing a burning candle that stands for her hopes.  She sees them as only a candle rather than a lighthouse because she fears they are not enough.




When longing for you

spells the end of self-restraint,

I prostrate myself

in a plea for your mercy,

uncaring of others’ eyes.


The first two lines are taken from a poem by Ki no Tsurayuki (BbN p.409):

               When longing for you

               spells the end of self-restraint,

               I leave my dwelling

               like the moon leaving the hills,

               and make my way to your door




A sensitive man

looks at life through his soul’s eye

must find a way home

through my detractors’ slander

to my rightful place at court.


“Eye” is a pivot-word; written out: ...looks at life through his soul’s eye.  I must find...”

“A sensitive... eye” is a preface; finding his way back to his place will require a sensitive and discerning eye on his part and that of his patron.  Also, the man feels alone against the slanderers—his is the “sole eye” that can see truth.

The slandered official was a common topos in the Chinese literature to which Japanese poets often looked for inspiration.




Trapped inside the room,

from the dark I can see light,

sunlight through the screens.

If I can see the glad beams,

Why can the light not touch me?


Why can’t I feel the sunlight from my dark room?  If I can see happiness and joy, why can’t I feel it?  Why can’t I go outside, into life/light/joy?




Cherry blossoms fall,

but I, I cannot touch them.

Birds must sing sweetly,

but I, I cannot hear them.

So distant to me, nature.


Is the speaker trapped in a room, like in the poem above?  Or is she dead?  Dead to the world.  Perhaps he is a Budhist priest, regretting how he must let go of everything in life, and could not now feel it even if he wanted.




Nature is distant.

Why so cold to me, Mother?

It is not my fault

I am trapped within this room,

unable to praise your charms.


Mother nature, who must be appreciated to be felt, and placated in order to be encompassing.  I wrote the previous three while making up time at school.




Must the sensitive soul

dam the spring of poetry

or endure always

the slings and arrows of life

determined to destroy it?


The question.  Self-indulgent, it is still true that the world can be cruel to the sensitive soul.  The speaker wonders if there’s any alternative to pain besides “turning off” her sensitivity.  

“Dam” here also means  its homonym, “damn.”  If you damn the spring you dam it so it no longer flows in the soul.  

“The slings and arrows of life” along with the question format allude to Hamlet’s soliloquy in Shakespeare’s Hamlet.  




Miscellaneous       17




Japan’s poetry,

charming and mysterious,

roots in human hearts

flourishes in leaves of words

flowers in the human soul.


The final line is my own, but the rest of this poem was adapted from a quote from Tsurayuki’s preface to the Kokinshū: “The poetry of Japan has its roots in the human heart and flourishes in the countless leaves of words.”




Ancient, stately tree

groans softly as it lies down

on the welcoming earth;

making a final pillow

out of bright clover and dew.

               The tree is the laurel tree, representing the Laurel order, or Laurel side in the Laurel vs. Pelican battles.  

The earth welcomes the tree, because it is time for the tree to pass.  

“Final” and “dew” reinforce the death-meaning of a tree lying down.  (“Dew,” by Japanese poetic convention (NP p.658) is an agent of change.)

“Ancient,” “groans,” and “final” contrast with “welcoming,” “bright,” and the image of sleep, to show that the laurel-tree’s death is no tragedy, but part of the natural order.  “Dew,” as a natural symbol of change, reinforces this.

“Final pillow” means the final gentle resting place, but also references the common topic (NP p.658) in Japanese poetry of making a pillow in travel (death is a journey).  It is also an allusion to a poem by Kakinomoto Hitomaro (fl. ca. 680-700), the NP translation of which reads,

“From open sea the waves

Break upon a rugged coast

Become your bedding

For the pillow you have made,

And so, my lord, your rest is here.”

It is a common tradition in Japanese poetry (especially in the 12th and 13th centuries) to “echo... and allude... to older poems or other parts of the shared cultural tradition in such a way that the older meaning is added to, or harmonized with, one’s own surface meaning.” (ItJCP p.24)

               “Pillow,” “groans,” and “lies down” (as opposed to “falls down”) anthropomorphosize the tree which is itself a metaphor for a certain person or people.




Is it that somehow

bubbles have become heavy?

From flowers and grass tips

hang delicate but ponderous

instead of floating in wind?


Elegant confusion of bubbles for dew drops, instead of the more conventional glass beads for dew drops.



Oh, charming dewdrop

ever hanging from a leaf,

vanquishing dryness,

nestled gently as a thought,

sensibility is yours.


Put together, the first syllables of each line make “Oh, evanescence,” a hidden comment on the dewdrop.

This idea comes from a poem by Ariwa Narihira (BbN p.480) in which the first syllable of each line make up the word for iris.




Dew brings evening,

melancholy nightingale.

Evening brings your song,

and your song brings my tears.

What might my gentle tears bring?


Reasoning technique, questioning.





Sunset is colorful,

but afterwards the beauty.

Fireflies twinkle

white blossoms tinge indigo

in the numinous gloaming.


This poem is meant to be in the en (charm) style articulated by Fujiwara Shunzei (1114-1204).




Contemplate with me

stillness after breathing out.

The gentle beauty

of trembling possibility.

An ending, or a beginning?


Questioning.  This poem asks both about the stillness between breaths, and the stillness after the final breath. Is the stillness between breaths the ending or beginning of the cycle?  Is the stillness after the final breath the end of life or the beginning of the next life?  Both tremble with possibility.  

I don’t know if anyone else would see it this way, but this poem puts me in mind of a butterfly: still, breath, beauty, trembling.  The last line could be the cocoon, in which case we have a sort of phoenix butterfly, breathing, spinning, and breathing.






Not ephemeral

as the lonely damselfly.

Man’s life may be short,

but his footprints linger on

long in the hearts of others.


This poem is in response to one by Ōe no Chisato (BbN p.379):

               More ephemeral

               than leaves from autumn branches

               whirling wherever

               the wind chooses to take them—

               even such is a man’s life.




I saw it afar

tender fruit hanging from boughs

and clumsily rushed

to grab and eat, but I wept

after I had tasted the fruit.


This poem is meant to bring to mind the Biblical story of Adam and Eve eating of the Tree of the Knowledge of Good and Evil.  (That’s also why I included the otherwise unnecessary word “had”: to reference the specific phrase, “They have tasted the fruit.”)  The poem is about a speaker tasting a fruit, demonstrating the Japanese value of sensibility by weeping because it is so good and, because of the word “but” and the Adam and Eve allusion, weeping because he will never again taste anything as good.  The fruit transports him, and he is suddenly ashamed of his clumsiness contrasted to the sublimeness of the fruit.

This poem is about how I thought it would be simple to write poetry in the Japanese idiom, but when I saw and learned about the great among the poems, my heart wrung its hands in despair.




I am distracted

from thoughts of hills and mountains

and the slow march of time

by the sight of the bright moon

skipping across the lake’s surface.


If one is contemplating Time, even the moon moves quickly.





Damson flowers in spring

pure white sparkling snow—

how can I focus

on seeing God if I am

distracted by His beauty?


The speaker is either a Budhist monk with a legitimate concern, or a Catholic monk who just doesn’t get it.  It is inspired by a poem by Sosei (Yoshimine Harutoshi)(BbN p.372):

               Where might I retreat

               to put aside worldly things?

               Mine is a spirit

               too easily led astray

               in fields and mountains alike.





The Swallow


Silly little bird.

Each morn you cry, “I am he!

“I am master of all!”

And yet if my cat got out,

he would swallow you whole.


I use both senses of the word “swallow.” This poem was inspired by one by Fujiwara Toshiyuki (BbN p.381):

               What is the number

               of the fields he cultivates—

               the cuckoo who cries

               every morning without fail,

               “Here is the field overseer”?




High above harbor

celestial beings sleeping;

by hovering clouds

their bodies represented.

But can they be awakened?


This was my first experiment at creating a tanka based on sound patterns.  The “h”s of “high,” “harbor,” and “hovering;” “s” and “z” sounds of “celestial,” “sleeping,” “beings,” “clouds,” “bodies,” and “represented.”  The two “k” sounds in the final line represent the harshness of awakening.  Sound patterns, including alliteration, were used in Japanese poetry.




High halls of Heorot,

the palace of Calontir

gives scope for great deeds.

Sculpted in spirit’s marble,

enduring as the people.


“High halls of Heorot” is my makurakotoba, or “pillow-word,” describing Calontir’s palace.  By some definitions the Heorot of Beowulf was a palace, and it represented goodness, human civilization, and culture.  It was also the stage for the great fight between Beowulf and Grendel, good and evil, and so gave “scope for great deeds.”  

The SCA kingdom of Calontir doesn’t have a palace building, so I suggest that it is a palace made of our spirit, “spirit’s marble,” and is as enduring as we are.  The tone implies that “the people” are enduring, but also shows the Japanese preoccupation with ephemerality by offering the obverse: if the people erode, the palace will fall.

Timbered mead hall to marble palaces, the poem also shows the temporal and cultural diversity of Calontir.




Sons of the falcon

we are fierce warriors brave

with piercing talons.

Since none would dare test our might,

we play at fighting ourselves.


This poem refers to Calontir, and her War of the Lilies.







The trappings of battle,

the feel of a victory,

the camaraderie—

I love war, and yet at night

icicles form on my nose.


Some years, this is barely hyperbole.

Frost forming on the sleeper is in this poem by Ōshikōchi Mitsune (BbN p.453):

               During this long trip

               I have lain time after time

               with grass for pillow,

               brushing away the first-frost

               that forms when the nights grow cold.




Long, convoluted

as Minos’ maze in Crete

this road I’ve chosen.

Oh, to have that ball,

that magical ball of twine!


The last two lines are similar to a pre-literate song.  Compare this anonymous, pre-712 song:

               Among the rice stalks,

               Among the rice stalks of the fields,

               Lying side by side,

               They twine and crawl about—

               The creeping vines.




Eccentric Poems  4




Hasten, o white bird

flapping over our kingdom.

Cherry droplets fall

to mingle with morning dew.


               This is the only non-tanka poem in the collection, which is why it is in Eccentric Poems.  As a tanka, this poem should theoretically have an additional line of seven syllables at the end, but it feels complete to me without it.  My poem is four lines long, as is this anonymous early song (ItJCP p.12):

                              “You skylark in the heavens,

                              O skylark, fly down here;

                              Rich grasses,

                              Rich grasses bear to me.”

Variation is also shown in Princess Nukata’s (fl. ca. 660-90) poem “On Preferring the Autumn Hills.” (translation ItJCP p.38)  As a chōka it can alternate lines of five and seven syllables indefinitely, but then should theoretically end in two lines of seven, not three lines.

                              “However, when I see

                              The leaves upon the autumn hills,

                              My eager hands

                              Tremble with their load of crimson leaves

                              And with reluctance

                              Leave the green ones on their boughs—

                              Yes, the green ones are the pity,

                              And the autumn hills for me.”

“Hasten, o white bird” is an allusion to “Song of the Shieldwall’s” “Hasten, o sea-steed.”  Both phrases begin with “hasten, o” and end with a spondee.  If the Japanese reference their previous poetry, why should I not reference ours?  “Song of the Shieldwall” is one of our kingdom’s great national treasures (even if outkingdomers wrote it) as are our Pelicans.

“White bird” is the pelican, representing the Pelican order.

I chose “flapping” over “flying” or “soaring” because flapping is evocative and means hard work, a hallmark of the Pelican.

               “Cherry droplets” are drops of blood, a symbol of the Order of the Pelican.  Since this is Japanese-style poetry, I also intend the phrase to bring to mind “cherry blossoms,” which symbolize spring; this is the springtime (auspicious beginning) of the time of the Pelican.  “Morning dew” reinforces this idea of beginnings.

               The pelican gives its blood to nurture its young; the pelican of the poem gives its blood to nurture spring; hard work brings forth the spring.

               There’s a bit of an in-joke in “droplets” and “dew.”  According to the NP p.659, “The erotic was expressed by images of wetness... and symbolized by spring...” and my Pelican husband is sexy.




The lonely wolf howls,

feeling his gnawing belly

cry out for a meal.

Be cheered, Brother, you’ve at least

a reason for your sadness.


I placed this in Eccentric because I haven’t run across poems mentioning anything like wolves.

In his unhappiness, the speaker feels a kinship with the wolf.  Or perhaps a blood relative is being likened to the pained wolf—if so, is he hungry because he is alone?  And was it his choice?




The evening brings rest,

poor, fretting baby;

it brings peace and silence.

Would you deny us one

by regretting the other?


How poetically do you say, “Shut up, kid”?




At glorious war

an inglorious happening.

This slick hill of mud,

regretting future absence,

has drawn me to its bosom.


Or, in less courtly language: splat!  Personification of a mud hill.

This is relegated to Eccentric Poems for being an insufficiently lofty subject.




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